Monday, 30 November 2015

working progress front page


4 comments:

  1. i assume your front cover is still in construction, whys the guys hand in the air like...

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  2. The cover page is not complete but, the background does not match the image so, I would go for a single colour background instead of a gradient

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  3. Again, there's not a lot I can comment on because it's obviously unfinished but here are my points for now:
    - The area where his white shirt is, the edges need refining as they have been cut a bit wobbly
    - Your model's facial expression and general composure is a bit odd as his arm looks quite random and his face looks confused
    - Seeing as your background is a gradient, gradient your model as well to match it to make it look more professional

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  4. It's don't look like a "music magazine" 🤕🤕😟

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