This is my own version of a double page spread however all the text is not to one side and my headline is in the middle. Everything else is still the same , my text is in columns and I have 2 images, facts and figure basically all the elements of double page spread .
Jemima, you have written a convincing argument, drawing on relevant research and backing up your opinions with facts. You could have developed your conclusion further. You have attempted to use some conventions of page layout such as a drop cap, columns, text boxes and images. These could have been more thoughtfully organised. Vanessa
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